Tuesday, November 25, 2014

The Final Adieu.

It started with the vibe. There was this uneasiness. I could feel something in my stomach (butterflies may be). I was nervous. We said good byes and he held my hand. He pulled me closer and I felt his breath. He asked slowly,"Bye?" 
I looked into his eyes and his lips touched mine. He held my waist and I grasped his hair. I closed my eyes; I felt his stare. It was slow and tender as a flowing river. He pushed me against the wall and loosened my hair. 

I kissed him back and passion took its place. We kissed long and we kissed hard. We breathed fast and wanted more. He held my face and pecked my nose. He licked my ear and bit my lobes. He whispered,"bye?"

The hunger set loose, we collapsed into one. I looked aside, he kissed my neck. I held his shirt and pulled him close. I said, "you should go" and kissed him again. He turned me back and one sided my hair, held my shoulders and I felt him on the nape. I couldn't resist and turned around. I pushed him a light and he gathered me tight.

We left our lock and gathered some breath. We looked deep in each others' eyes and could hear heart beats. We didn't know what will be. It felt complete.

We had craved our soul and got it in the end. We lost our chance; it was the final adieu. We didn't speak a word and may be silence spoke it's max.
He kissed on the forehead, again pecked my nose. His eyes were red and i cried a tear. "Good-bye darling, tonight will always be there".


6 comments:

  1. Excellent portrayal of the feelings of love and departure. You have excelled at this..keep posting more of your work (y)

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    1. Thankyou so much. I am inspired to write by your motivation. :* :)

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  2. Feels like actually doing it when one reads "the final adieu"
    The choice of words is excellent.
    The rhyming of words is an icing on the cake.

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    1. This means so much to me. Thanks rishi. You make me happy. :D

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  3. It's beautiful. Seems like over in a breath but still not over, flowing on effortlessly

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    1. Thanks Vasu. It's amazing coming from a blogger himself. Your work is inspiring. :)

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